Monday, March 26, 2012

I ? Why ?

A poem on female feticide---

Tis not for me to ask you why,
Nor do i expect you to heave a sigh,
Why would you even think of me ?
I don't exist,was never meant to be!
A shameful burden,a painful sore,
Why should you choose to let it grow?
I don't count, who am  i ?
The umbilical cord never did tie!

17 comments :

  1. beautifulllllll . loved it

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  2. Thanks Kajal,i was not sure if it would be liked.

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  3. beautiful , simply superb !!!
    Glad u wrote it !!
    n thanks !!

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    1. And thanks again for joining jeeteraho.

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  4. Actually the whole credit goes to DD who challenged me to write it-----when you are thrown into water you have to swim !!!Your comment is very encouraging,thanks for dropping by .

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  5. Awesome... beautiful...
    Hats off Indu

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  6. Ani thanks for your appreciation..am i pleased !!
    Nice to see you here.

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  7. hmmm pretty well written lines.. It really talks a lot.

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  8. Thanks Ashwini, & welcome to jeeteraho!

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  9. Beautiful. I felt that you were initially unsure of what to write about this issue but it has turned out very well. :)

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  10. thank you akshay...actually i don't normally write poetry,but this topic touched me so,that i wrote down these lines within half an hour of getting the challenge-they came straight from my heart---but for some reason i reverted them to draft soon after.i am glad you liked them.

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    1. Hi AM,welcome to jeeteraho,thanks for appreciation!

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    2. Its beautiful!like like super-like!

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