Thursday, June 21, 2012

MORE ? No more !

Yes,it is true.
We only get,
What is our due.
The spirit soars,
Hungry for more.
The toil and strife,
Cut through like knife.
The swelters on heart,
Make no one start.
Where is the pain ?
I laugh again !

20 comments :

  1. beautifully expressed..........

    anu

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  2. Very nice poem Indu..:-)
    Award for you..:-)
    http://ahomemakersutopia.blogspot.in/2012/06/awards-galore.html

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  3. Thanks a lot-for the appreciation as well as the award.

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  4. Induji--poem!!!! Wow! How cool! Very nice--the last line rounds it up well!

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  5. Bhavna you are chicken soup for soul.

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    1. Oh my dear,what a question !!!Now you are motivating me to think some more.

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  7. Well... there's no end to our aspirations!We get only what is due---that's the truth of life :)
    Thought provoking and mpressive lines,Indu.Lovely...

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    1. And a lovely comment from panchali !

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  8. More? Certainly more of this!

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  9. Hey Indu! Congrats!!..what an awesome poem to start with:) ..loved it! Wish all doctors were a little bit of a poet at heart:) Incredible..! Please give us more of this sweet dose:)

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    1. There is "tears"-it was posted b4 this one &" one wrong turn" after this one.

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  10. Well well praise from a poet!How nice.Do you know there are a couple of more poems there?

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    1. ...how do I know unless I read them?:)
      So, please make me read them:)

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  11. Thanks shovonc,&welcome to jeeteraho.

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