Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Meraa Aangan

Kya aaj bhi mere aangan mein,
Woh thandi hawayen chalti hain?
Ik neh ki badli chaati hai,
Rishton ki belen ugti hain?

Hoti thi sukoon ki yun baarish,
Sapnon ki kaliyaan khilti thin.
Jee sarabor ho jaataa thaa,
Lehron pe lehren uthti thin.

Saada thaa par sachhai thi,
Har rishte mein gehraayi thi,
Santushti ki us haritima par,
Khushiyon ki arunaayi thi.

Nahin dhoop kahin teekhi chubhti,
Bas thandi meethi chhaaya thi,
Wahan par devon kaa saaya tha,
Yaa aangan ki hi garima thi?


Kya ab bhi vahaan par vaise hi,
Sapnon ke gulshan khilte hain?
Unmukt hansi,chanchal bachpan,
Ke jaise moti milte hain?

Haan nahin wo ghar,na wo aangan,
Par zameen vahaan ki aaj bhi hai,
Us zameen ki snehil  godi mein,
Mera vishwaas,aaj bhi hai.

Shayad ab bhi us aangan mein,
Wo thandi hawayen chalti hain.
Dil baag baag ho jata hai,
Jab yaadein karvat leti hain.


30 comments :

  1. What prompted this nostalgia trip, Indu? Whatever it was, it is a lovely poem, so full of yearning and longing. 'Saada thaa par sachhai thi,
    Har rishte mein gehraayi thi' -- loved the lines.

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    1. Zephyr your praise is very reassuring-you have really made my day!

      Even i don't know how i just slipped back to old times & these thoughts came gushing forth.Thanks again,my friend!

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    1. Thank you Uma-it is good to see you here.

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  3. itni sunder aur marmsparshi kavita me comment karna is waqt thoda mushkil hai Indu ji

    bas itna kah sakti hoon ----dil ko chhoo liya aur aankhe nam ho gayee


    abbki baras bhej bhaiya ko babul sawan me lijo bulaye re

    ki yaad aa gayee

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  4. Rajni this is the best compliment i ever got-thanks a trillion.
    Nostalgia is such-it touches the heart.
    Love n hugs.

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  5. It is very rare that I understand poetry.This one I did.
    It's superb

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    1. Chowla jee thanks for your continued support,it encourages me.

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    1. So sweet n satisfying-------your comment !

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  8. Ah, Induji! Nostalgia at its best "Dil baag baag ho jaata hai jab yaadein karvat leti hain" Same is the case with me, ditto :)

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    1. I was so pleased to see that you identify with my emotions-thank you Arti.
      Love n blessings!

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  9. Beautiful, just beautiful. Ending verse will stay with me for a long time.

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  10. Praise from a poetess of your standing? Just what i need !

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  11. Beautiful poem..ati sundar..

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  12. Beautiful and nostalgic :)
    Hugs
    Deepa

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  13. Lovely poetry Indu! A perfect ode to the cold breeze:)

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  14. @Renu @Deepa @RahulThanks a lot for commending my efforts--i am beginning to believe i can write poetry !
    All you dear bloggers have made me very happy-bless you!

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  15. HI Induji,
    What a fantastic poem - it reminded me my family house - where I and my cousins used to play cricket when we were kids ......
    Fantastic Induji - Thanks for sharing !!
    I am now a proud follower of your blog
    Regards
    Bhavikk shah
    www.bhavikkshah.blogspot.in

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  16. HI Induji,
    What a fantastic poem - it reminded me my family house - where I and my cousins used to play cricket when we were kids ......
    Fantastic Induji - Thanks for sharing !!
    I am now a proud follower of your blog
    Regards
    Bhavikk shah
    www.bhavikkshah.blogspot.in

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  18. Bhavik welcome aboard!
    I am indebted to you for this cute & encouraging comment,thanks a lot!

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