Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Takdiren

Takdiren
Jyun ret pe lakiren
Gehree kabhi itni,ke dil cheer jaatin,
Kabhi itni dhundhlee,ke samajh nahin aatin.
Abhi abhi aanki thin khush ho kisine,
Kshan bhar hi thehrin,phir dekhi na kisine.
Seedhi kabhi tirchi,kabhi jhoom ke lehraatin,
Beeti hui baaton ke gam ko bhulatin.
Aur phir achanak ye khud hi khinch jaatin,
Terhe merhe raaston pe,badhti hi jaatin.

Banaye nahin bantin,mitaye nahin mittin,
Andekhe haathon ne khinchi lakiren.

Related posts :--
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2013/02/me-and-my-destiny.html

http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2012/07/it-happens.html

http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2013/12/passing-momentslost-moments.html

http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2014/04/dawn-at-dusk.html


12 comments :

  1. Beautiful poem and love your every lines... :)

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    1. Thank you Arpita.
      A warm welcome to you from jeeteraho.

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  2. We think we can control our destiny but it has its own mind.

    Beautifully composed, Indu.

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    1. Thank you Purba,you have put me on cloud nine :)

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  3. Abhi abhi aanki thin khush ho kisine,
    Kshan bhar hi thehrin,phir dekhi na kisine.

    shayd yahi hai takdeer Indu ji -----jiske har pal se hum anjaan hotey hai --every thing is so uncertain ---kal kya hoga kisko pataa

    thanks have missed your last two posts am on my way to them :)

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    1. Yes Rajni,life can be very frustrating at times-you came face to face with it so early on.
      Lots of love.

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  4. Loved the verses, Indu. It was good to go through the others once again too. Thanks for linking them all here :)

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    1. I am so happy it clicked with you,thanks for reading them again.
      Love n hugs.

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  5. Fate is like that only! Great lines.

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  6. nicely written....Some say destiny is predestines....while some say you make your own....i believe the lines on our hand do change over time..

    Regards
    KHOJ

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    1. Thanks for coming over SUBHRASHIS.
      I agree the lines on our hands do change with time.

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