Tuesday, February 13, 2018

Man Ki Patang

मन की पतंग 
सुबह से उड़ रही है 
झेल के आयी है कितने ही ताप 
पहुंची थी जाके कहीं सूरज के पास 

खींच लिया मैंने उसे अपनी ओर 
शुक्र है अब तक पक्की है डोर

पर इन हवाओं का क्या है इलाज 
भटकाती रहती हैं इसकी परवाज 

कब तक उड़ेगी ये कब तक तनेगी 
सर्द गरम मौसम ये कब तक सहेगी 

रुकेगी तो काँटों में फस जायेगी 
के क्षत क्षत ये हो कर बिखर जायेगी 

उड़ती रहो फिर यूँ उड़ती रहो 
सम्भालो मुझे खुद संभालती रहो। 






25 comments :

  1. बहुत सुंदर इन्दु जी ।

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  3. बहुत सुंदर रचना . कितना अच्छा हो अगर मन की पतंग शांत, मुस्कुराती हुई ठंडी हवा में झूलती रहे और हमें भी शान्त्मग्न कर दे.

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    1. AAP ne toh bahut he sundar tasveer khinchi hai.Kaash aisa ho.

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    1. Thank you Deepa.
      Happy to see you here :)

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  5. Love the last 2 lines the most!
    The poem reminds me of a recent Bollywood song.
    Replacing the lyrics:
    Udi udi jaaye, "Mann" ki patang dekho, udi udi jaaye! :)

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  6. Is it? Never heard this song.
    Thanks for dropping by.

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  7. Fabulous! I think if you put this down in Hindi, it would come out to be even better!

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    1. Thank you Alok.I would,but how?I don't have Hindi keyboard here.Shall look it up however.
      Thanks for the suggestion.Typing it in Eng script is rather cumbersome too.

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  8. This is really very nice, Indu. Loved reading Hindi poetry.

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    1. Thank you dear,I am happy that you liked it.It means a lot.

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  9. That was really beautiful Indu. Indeed, a mind that never wanders or never ventures beyond familiar territory will eventually get stuck in a rut and rot away.

    Keep writing.

    Cheers,
    CRD
    Scripted In Sanity

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    1. Thanks a lot CRD,and welcome to jeeteraho

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    1. Thanks a lot I.D,and welcome to jeeteraho!

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