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Thursday, June 21, 2012

MORE ? No more !

Yes,it is true.
We only get,
What is our due.

 The spirit soars,
Hungry for more.

 The toil and strife,
Cut through like knife.

 The swelters on heart,
Make no one start.

 Forget the pain,
Let us laugh again !
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23 comments:

  1. ANULATA RAJ NAIRJune 22, 2012 12:29 PM

    beautifully expressed..........

    anu

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  2. indu chhibberJune 22, 2012 6:07 PM

    Thanks a lot Anu.

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  3. A Homemaker's UtopiaJune 23, 2012 12:01 PM

    Very nice poem Indu..:-)
    Award for you..:-)
    http://ahomemakersutopia.blogspot.in/2012/06/awards-galore.html

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  4. indu chhibberJune 23, 2012 12:17 PM

    Thanks a lot-for the appreciation as well as the award.

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  5. BhavanaJune 23, 2012 6:49 PM

    Induji--poem!!!! Wow! How cool! Very nice--the last line rounds it up well!

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  6. indu chhibberJune 23, 2012 7:44 PM

    Bhavna you are chicken soup for soul.

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  7. Life UnordinaryJune 24, 2012 9:00 PM

    what inspires you?

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    1. indu chhibberJune 25, 2012 9:24 AM

      Oh my dear,what a question !!!Now you are motivating me to think some more.

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  8. PanchaliJune 25, 2012 12:09 AM

    Well... there's no end to our aspirations!We get only what is due---that's the truth of life :)
    Thought provoking and mpressive lines,Indu.Lovely...

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  9. C SureshJuly 05, 2012 9:58 PM

    More? Certainly more of this!

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  10. indu chhibberJuly 06, 2012 6:26 AM

    Thank you Suresh.

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  11. AmitAagJuly 06, 2012 11:23 AM

    Hey Indu! Congrats!!..what an awesome poem to start with:) ..loved it! Wish all doctors were a little bit of a poet at heart:) Incredible..! Please give us more of this sweet dose:)

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    1. indu chhibberJuly 07, 2012 2:49 PM

      There is "tears"-it was posted b4 this one &" one wrong turn" after this one.

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  12. indu chhibberJuly 06, 2012 12:15 PM

    Well well praise from a poet!How nice.Do you know there are a couple of more poems there?

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    1. AmitAagJuly 07, 2012 2:39 PM

      ...how do I know unless I read them?:)
      So, please make me read them:)

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  13. TTTJuly 06, 2012 5:59 PM

    Lovely poem Indu ...

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  14. AnonymousAugust 31, 2012 3:41 PM

    Nice and crisp. Liked it.

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  15. indu chhibberAugust 31, 2012 5:35 PM

    Thanks shovonc,&welcome to jeeteraho.

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  16. Preeti ChauhanSeptember 29, 2018 7:58 PM

    Just stumbled upon your blog and loved it.

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    1. indu chhibberSeptember 30, 2018 6:52 PM

      This comment has been removed by the author.

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    2. indu chhibberOctober 02, 2018 9:50 AM

      Thanks Preeti.I am very happy this happened.Do, come again.

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