ज्यूँ रेत पे लकीरें।
गहरी कभी इतनी क़ि दिल चीर जातीं।
गहरी कभी इतनी क़ि दिल चीर जातीं।
कभी इतनी धुंधली , समझ भी न आतीं।
अभी अभी आंकी थी खुश हो किसीने,
क्षण भर ही ठहरीं,फिर न देखी किसीने।
सीधी कभी तिरछी, कभी यूँ लहरातीं ,
बीती हुई बातों के गम को भुलातीं।
कभी फिर अचानक ये खुद ही खिंच जातीं,
टेढ़े मेढ़े रास्तों पे बढ़ती ही जातीं।
बनाये नहीं बनतीं,मिटाये नहीं मिटतीं,
अनदेखे हाथों ने खींची लकीरें।
अनदेखे हाथों ने खींची लकीरें।
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http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2013/02/me-and-my-destiny.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2012/07/it-happens.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2013/12/passing-momentslost-moments.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2014/04/dawn-at-dusk.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2013/02/me-and-my-destiny.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2012/07/it-happens.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2013/12/passing-momentslost-moments.html
http://jeeteraho.blogspot.in/2014/04/dawn-at-dusk.html
Beautiful poem and love your every lines... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Arpita.
DeleteA warm welcome to you from jeeteraho.
We think we can control our destiny but it has its own mind.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully composed, Indu.
Thank you Purba,you have put me on cloud nine :)
DeleteAbhi abhi aanki thin khush ho kisine,
ReplyDeleteKshan bhar hi thehrin,phir dekhi na kisine.
shayd yahi hai takdeer Indu ji -----jiske har pal se hum anjaan hotey hai --every thing is so uncertain ---kal kya hoga kisko pataa
thanks have missed your last two posts am on my way to them :)
Yes Rajni,life can be very frustrating at times-you came face to face with it so early on.
DeleteLots of love.
Loved the verses, Indu. It was good to go through the others once again too. Thanks for linking them all here :)
ReplyDeleteI am so happy it clicked with you,thanks for reading them again.
DeleteLove n hugs.
Fate is like that only! Great lines.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked them Indrani.
Deletenicely written....Some say destiny is predestines....while some say you make your own....i believe the lines on our hand do change over time..
ReplyDeleteRegards
KHOJ
Thanks for coming over SUBHRASHIS.
DeleteI agree the lines on our hands do change with time.