A poem on female feticide---
Tis not for me to ask you why,
Nor do i expect you to heave a sigh,
Why would you even think of me ?
I don't exist,was never meant to be!
A shameful burden,a painful sore,
Why should you choose to let it grow?
I don't count, who am i ?
The umbilical cord never did tie!
Tis not for me to ask you why,
Nor do i expect you to heave a sigh,
Why would you even think of me ?
I don't exist,was never meant to be!
A shameful burden,a painful sore,
Why should you choose to let it grow?
I don't count, who am i ?
The umbilical cord never did tie!
beautifulllllll . loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Kajal,i was not sure if it would be liked.
ReplyDeletebeautiful , simply superb !!!
ReplyDeleteGlad u wrote it !!
n thanks !!
And thanks again for joining jeeteraho.
DeleteActually the whole credit goes to DD who challenged me to write it-----when you are thrown into water you have to swim !!!Your comment is very encouraging,thanks for dropping by .
ReplyDeleteAwesome... beautiful...
ReplyDeleteHats off Indu
Ani thanks for your appreciation..am i pleased !!
ReplyDeleteNice to see you here.
hmmm pretty well written lines.. It really talks a lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashwini, & welcome to jeeteraho!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I felt that you were initially unsure of what to write about this issue but it has turned out very well. :)
ReplyDeletethank you akshay...actually i don't normally write poetry,but this topic touched me so,that i wrote down these lines within half an hour of getting the challenge-they came straight from my heart---but for some reason i reverted them to draft soon after.i am glad you liked them.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely wonderful, Indu!
ReplyDeletethanks amit...nice to see you here.
DeletePoignant! loved it
ReplyDeleteHi AM,welcome to jeeteraho,thanks for appreciation!
DeleteIts beautiful!like like super-like!
DeleteThank you G.L.
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