When she leaves,
For her eternal abode,
Something breaks
No more the assurance,
Of her warm presence,
Nor any hope,
To see her beloved face.
To see her beloved face.
Something breaks
What a blessing it was,
To just enter a gate,
And be engulfed,
In her fond embrace.
Something breaks.
Tender and sweet,
Her memories wrap,
Like a snug soft sheet.
A lot remains,
But something breaks.
Tender and sweet,
Her memories wrap,
Like a snug soft sheet.
A lot remains,
But something breaks.
Hi Indu,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Deep Sentiments.
Uppal welcome to jeeteraho,thanks a ton for your appreciation.
DeleteInduji -- Can I just give you a *warm virtual hug* instead of saying anything for this post?
ReplyDeleteI love you Arti,nothing like that hug.
DeleteBless you .
This is so intense Indu Ji..With Deep meanings...I literally loved this..
ReplyDeleteThank you Harsha,i am glad you liked it.
DeleteLovely composition Indu Ji :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jahid,you are very kind.
DeleteTouching and beautiful poem wrapped with feelings :)
ReplyDeleteSri Valli thanks a lot for this sweet comment.
DeleteDaughter home? :) I love poems..so,this is one of that :)
ReplyDeletethank you Latha.
DeleteMoving
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh.
DeleteI pictured it, I know it meant more on the metaphorical side but the words created an image for me... beautiful poetry..
ReplyDeleteRicha
Oh Richa,you are overwhelming.Thank you for this beautiful comment and welcome to jeeteraho.
ReplyDeleteThis poem touches my soul deeply. How beautifully you have written something very deep in meaning!! Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteYou made my day Bharati,thanks a ton and welcome here.
Deletea very sentimental ,moving and touching poem Indu ji
ReplyDeleteI tried to read this one a few days back but it said that the poem had been removed
its a beautiful poem expressing such touching sentiments thanks for sharing
I have been away from the net for quite sometime due to health problems ---but am ok now hope to remain ok too so that I will be able to read such works of art and wisdom as yours and as those of other blogger friends too
thanks once again
warm regards in these cold winter months
love
rajni
Rajni i am very happy to see you here at last--i had been worrying about you,why you were not to be seen anywhere.Now keep well--it took quite long for you to get normal .
DeleteThanks a lot for your encouraging words-i am totally floored.
Lots of love.
Poignant
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping over.
DeleteVery touching and your magic of words makes it more moving!
ReplyDeleteRahul i am blessed to have encouraging readers like you-thanks.
DeleteTouching Indu!
ReplyDeleteYes jaish,the subject is thus.
DeleteWhat a lovely compliment Jeena.
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