Ab to hum aa gaye hain raahon mein,
Raah kitni bachi hai raahon mein?
Kar diya maaf sab gunaahon ko,
Ye bhi shamil hua gunaahon mein.
Ek hi se vafa to mumkin hai,
Thi wo khud se, ya phir wo tum se hai,
Kar ke khud maaf yun sitamgar ko,
Hum bhi shaamil hue, paraayon mein.
Vakt kaisa ho,wo gujarta ha,
Zakhm bharta hai,par wo chubhta hai.
Bas kisi par nahin siva apne,
Dil ye apna, hai gunahgaaron mein.
Hai tapish kam magar,khalish si hai,
Badli yaadon ki ab ghiri kyun hai?
Kaanton ke beech gul bhi khilte hain,
Kaanton se apni dosti bhi hai.
Kuchh to apni bhi bewakoofi thi,
Aur kismat mein bhi maayoosi thi,
Akl aate hi aate aati hai,
Shikwa auron se is kadar kyun hai?
Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
Ismein galti nahin kisiki hai.
Jo bhi boya thaa,wo hi paaya hai,
Ranjish ye jhoot,bewajah si hai.
Har jagah sabj, gulo-gulshan hon,
Ye to mumkin nahin,sadak bhi hai,
Raat kitni bhi ghup andheri ho,
Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!
Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!
Vakt kaisa ho,wo gujarta ha,
Zakhm bharta hai,par wo chubhta hai.
Bas kisi par nahin siva apne,
Dil ye apna, hai gunahgaaron mein.
Hai tapish kam magar,khalish si hai,
Badli yaadon ki ab ghiri kyun hai?
Kaanton ke beech gul bhi khilte hain,
Kaanton se apni dosti bhi hai.
Kuchh to apni bhi bewakoofi thi,
Aur kismat mein bhi maayoosi thi,
Akl aate hi aate aati hai,
Shikwa auron se is kadar kyun hai?
Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
Ismein galti nahin kisiki hai.
Jo bhi boya thaa,wo hi paaya hai,
Ranjish ye jhoot,bewajah si hai.
Har jagah sabj, gulo-gulshan hon,
Ye to mumkin nahin,sadak bhi hai,
Raat kitni bhi ghup andheri ho,
Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!
Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!
"Raat kitni bhi ghup andheri ho,
ReplyDeleteUske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!"
... Isi ka naam Zindagi hai! :)
Thank you Arti for completing the last line.
Deletevichar v bhav pradhan kavita
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteHi aftr long tym m here... Nd ur poem is awesm... Vaqt k sath sab badal jata h... Nice line to start... Keep writing:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ajnabi,i am glad you liked it.
DeleteWonderful flow of words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajesh.
DeleteKya baat hai! It reminded me of Saher. Beautiful poem Ma'am. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful compliment Saru,you are no less!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful throughout, Indu, I loved "Ek hi se vafa to mumkin hai, Thi wo khud se, ya phir wo tum se hai" the most though:):)
ReplyDeleteYour comment is very heartening-thank you!
ReplyDeletegreat choice of words, great flow.
ReplyDeleteI loved its positive end.
Great praise Meenakshi-you have made my day.
Delete'Waqt ni kiya kya hasi sitam, tum rahe na tum hum rahe na hum'Waqt ki saath sub badalta hai! Nice one Indu!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your concurrence Rahul-it's true change is the only constant.
DeleteBahut khoob likhi!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletenice read
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it.
DeleteBahut khoob likha hai Indu. Keep rocking!
ReplyDeleteFayaz welcome to jeeteraho & thanks for your appreciation.
Deleteachhi kavita ke liye badhayi
ReplyDeleteThank you Gajadhar.
DeleteIndu ji
ReplyDeleteevery word has so much meaning ----I can not find the appropriate words to comment on this poem -because no words will convey what i feel -----it is a fabulous piece of writing
thanks alot
Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
Ismein galti nahin kisiki hai.
OMG Rajni your sweet praise has really made my day-thank you ever so much.
ReplyDeleteLots of love!
Zakhm bharta hai- par vo chubhta hai - You stole my heart away with this line!
ReplyDeleteLoved being here and surrounded by poetry! Thanks for sharing the link.
Akanksha welcome here.I am very happy that you liked your first visit-hope i will not disappoint you later.
ReplyDeleteEach word,each line, is rich with meaning and emotion...an absolute blockbuster of a poem.
ReplyDeleteYou have floored me totally with your praise Sucharita--this is great for my morale.
Delete"...Aur kismat mein bhi maayoosi thi..." ...umm... surreal!
ReplyDeleteAshish welcome to jeeterho & thanks a ton!
Delete"Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
ReplyDeleteIsmein galti nahin kisiki hai.
Jo bhi boya thaa,wo hi paaya hai,
Ranjish ye jhoot,bewajah si hai."----wish people really understood the value of giving positive strokes rather than spending time in criticising. This is b e a u t i f u l...!!!
Coming from you Panchali, this praise is awesome!!!!!!
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