Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Stark Reality

Dissolved in the waters,
Dispersed in air,
Your beloved presence,
Though everywhere,
Is now nowhere.

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  1. Intense Lines Indu ji..Sometimes we miss our near and dear ones so deeply but alas they are nowhere to be find--This is my interpretation of these lines

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    1. Harsha you have said precisely what i was feeling-thanks.

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  2. Strong emotions there; one of missing somebody dear.
    Well written Indu.

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    1. Yes Indrani when dear ones pass away-it hurts.

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  4. Ah, painful reality! Beautifully penned.
    But, c'est a la vie....:(

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    1. Panchali your praise counts a lot-thank you so much.

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  5. ouuu that so touching, what a beautiful write

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    1. Rajlakshmi that is a very nice comment-thank you and welcome to jeeteraho.

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  6. so profound and beautiful..dissolved in the waters..dispersed in the air..I can feel those words.

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    1. Hi Alka,welcome to jeeteraho ,thanks for your support.

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  8. Just a few words. And it touched the emotions

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  9. Lovely, . . . A G+ for Ur Post and Have a nice Day. . .. :)

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    1. Our Jaipur thanks a ton,you too have a nice week end.

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  10. sad words Indu ji --- they bring out the sentiments --and convey the message -----very touching lines

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    1. yes Rajni,reality is sometimes v.sad.
      Btw where have u been ,not seen you since long?
      Love n hugs.

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  11. This is just like 'Water water everywhere, but not a drop to drink'. For instance, sometimes we think think we are surrounded by people. But on a closer look, we would find those people devoid of affection for us! Wonderful lines! Nicely written :-)

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    1. Yes Ashwini life has these dichotomies.
      Thanks for your wonderful words.

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  12. Wow...words expressing feelings...nice one

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    1. Thanx Ranjana for this beautiful comment.

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  13. Reality indeed!!....its a thoughtful one, Indu ..and I am at loss of words and don't know what to say so hmmm becomes a nodding :-((( sigh!

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    1. Panchali thanks for stopping and commenting.

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  14. Beautiful expression in the poem...Simple and sweet!

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    1. Thank you Sri Valli ,very nice of you.

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