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Intense Lines Indu ji..Sometimes we miss our near and dear ones so deeply but alas they are nowhere to be find--This is my interpretation of these lines
Harsha you have said precisely what i was feeling-thanks.
thank you Rajesh.
Strong emotions there; one of missing somebody dear.Well written Indu.
Yes Indrani when dear ones pass away-it hurts.
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Ah, painful reality! Beautifully penned. But, c'est a la vie....:(
Panchali your praise counts a lot-thank you so much.
ouuu that so touching, what a beautiful write
Rajlakshmi that is a very nice comment-thank you and welcome to jeeteraho.
so profound and beautiful..dissolved in the waters..dispersed in the air..I can feel those words.
Latha thanks for this.
Short and poignant.
Hi Alka,welcome to jeeteraho ,thanks for your support.
Just a few words. And it touched the emotions
Nice to see you back Chowla ji.
Lovely, . . . A G+ for Ur Post and Have a nice Day. . .. :)
Our Jaipur thanks a ton,you too have a nice week end.
Thank you Rahul.
sad words Indu ji --- they bring out the sentiments --and convey the message -----very touching lines
yes Rajni,reality is sometimes v.sad.Btw where have u been ,not seen you since long?Love n hugs.
Deeply felt lines. Indu
Geetashree thanks for understanding.
This is just like 'Water water everywhere, but not a drop to drink'. For instance, sometimes we think think we are surrounded by people. But on a closer look, we would find those people devoid of affection for us! Wonderful lines! Nicely written :-)
Yes Ashwini life has these dichotomies.Thanks for your wonderful words.
Wow...words expressing feelings...nice one
Thanx Ranjana for this beautiful comment.
Just like reality sometimes is.
Reality indeed!!....its a thoughtful one, Indu ..and I am at loss of words and don't know what to say so hmmm becomes a nodding :-((( sigh!
Panchali thanks for stopping and commenting.
Beautiful expression in the poem...Simple and sweet!
Thank you Sri Valli ,very nice of you.
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