Sunday, November 10, 2013

Something Breaks

When she leaves,
For her eternal abode,

Something breaks

No more the assurance,
Of her warm presence,
Nor any hope,
To see her beloved face.

Something breaks

What a blessing it was,
To just enter a gate,
And be engulfed,
In her fond  embrace.

Something breaks.

Tender and sweet,
Her memories wrap,
Like a snug soft sheet.
A lot remains,
But something breaks.



28 comments :

  1. Hi Indu,
    Beautiful poem. Deep Sentiments.

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    1. Uppal welcome to jeeteraho,thanks a ton for your appreciation.

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  2. Induji -- Can I just give you a *warm virtual hug* instead of saying anything for this post?

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    1. I love you Arti,nothing like that hug.
      Bless you .

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  3. This is so intense Indu Ji..With Deep meanings...I literally loved this..

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    1. Thank you Harsha,i am glad you liked it.

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  4. Lovely composition Indu Ji :)

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  5. Touching and beautiful poem wrapped with feelings :)

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    1. Sri Valli thanks a lot for this sweet comment.

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  6. Daughter home? :) I love poems..so,this is one of that :)

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  7. I pictured it, I know it meant more on the metaphorical side but the words created an image for me... beautiful poetry..

    Richa

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  8. Oh Richa,you are overwhelming.Thank you for this beautiful comment and welcome to jeeteraho.

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  9. This poem touches my soul deeply. How beautifully you have written something very deep in meaning!! Lovely :)

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    1. You made my day Bharati,thanks a ton and welcome here.

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  10. a very sentimental ,moving and touching poem Indu ji

    I tried to read this one a few days back but it said that the poem had been removed

    its a beautiful poem expressing such touching sentiments thanks for sharing

    I have been away from the net for quite sometime due to health problems ---but am ok now hope to remain ok too so that I will be able to read such works of art and wisdom as yours and as those of other blogger friends too
    thanks once again
    warm regards in these cold winter months
    love
    rajni

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    1. Rajni i am very happy to see you here at last--i had been worrying about you,why you were not to be seen anywhere.Now keep well--it took quite long for you to get normal .
      Thanks a lot for your encouraging words-i am totally floored.
      Lots of love.

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  11. Very touching and your magic of words makes it more moving!

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    1. Rahul i am blessed to have encouraging readers like you-thanks.

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