Sunday, February 17, 2013

Vakt ke Saath

Ab to hum aa gaye hain raahon mein,
Raah kitni bachi hai raahon mein?
Kar diya maaf sab gunaahon ko,
Ye bhi shamil hua gunaahon mein.

Ek hi se vafa to mumkin hai,
Thi wo khud se, ya phir wo tum se hai,
Kar ke khud maaf yun sitamgar ko,
Hum bhi shaamil hue, paraayon mein.

 Vakt kaisa ho,wo gujarta ha,
Zakhm bharta hai,par wo chubhta hai.
Bas kisi par nahin siva apne,
Dil ye apna, hai gunahgaaron mein.

 Hai tapish kam magar,khalish si hai,
Badli yaadon ki ab ghiri kyun hai?
Kaanton ke beech gul bhi khilte hain,
Kaanton se apni dosti bhi hai.

 Kuchh to apni bhi bewakoofi thi,
Aur kismat mein bhi maayoosi thi,
Akl aate hi aate aati hai,
Shikwa auron se is kadar kyun hai?

 Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
Ismein galti nahin kisiki hai.
Jo bhi boya thaa,wo hi paaya hai,
Ranjish ye jhoot,bewajah si hai.

 Har jagah sabj, gulo-gulshan hon,
Ye to mumkin nahin,sadak bhi hai,
Raat kitni bhi ghup andheri ho,
Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!
Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!

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  1. ArtiFebruary 18, 2013 9:36 AM

    "Raat kitni bhi ghup andheri ho,
    Uske hi baad to sahar bhi hai!"

    ... Isi ka naam Zindagi hai! :)

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  2. KarupathFebruary 18, 2013 11:28 AM

    vichar v bhav pradhan kavita

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  3. AJNABIFebruary 18, 2013 11:54 AM

    Hi aftr long tym m here... Nd ur poem is awesm... Vaqt k sath sab badal jata h... Nice line to start... Keep writing:)

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  4. RajeshFebruary 19, 2013 12:31 AM

    Wonderful flow of words.

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  5. Saru SinghalFebruary 19, 2013 1:45 AM

    Kya baat hai! It reminded me of Saher. Beautiful poem Ma'am. :)

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  6. indu chhibberFebruary 19, 2013 7:22 AM

    Beautiful compliment Saru,you are no less!

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  7. AmitAagFebruary 19, 2013 11:18 AM

    Very beautiful throughout, Indu, I loved "Ek hi se vafa to mumkin hai, Thi wo khud se, ya phir wo tum se hai" the most though:):)

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  8. indu chhibberFebruary 19, 2013 3:29 PM

    Your comment is very heartening-thank you!

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  9. Woman'n'BeyondFebruary 19, 2013 3:38 PM

    great choice of words, great flow.

    I loved its positive end.

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  10. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 19, 2013 4:51 PM

    'Waqt ni kiya kya hasi sitam, tum rahe na tum hum rahe na hum'Waqt ki saath sub badalta hai! Nice one Indu!!

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    1. indu chhibberFebruary 19, 2013 5:02 PM

      Thanks for your concurrence Rahul-it's true change is the only constant.

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  11. magiceyeFebruary 19, 2013 5:21 PM

    Bahut khoob likhi!

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  12. The MukhtiarsFebruary 19, 2013 5:38 PM

    nice read

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  13. www.lifepartneracademy.comFebruary 19, 2013 10:07 PM

    Bahut khoob likha hai Indu. Keep rocking!

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    1. indu chhibberFebruary 20, 2013 7:23 AM

      Fayaz welcome to jeeteraho & thanks for your appreciation.

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  14. KarupathFebruary 20, 2013 12:19 AM

    achhi kavita ke liye badhayi

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  15. Rajni SinhaFebruary 20, 2013 8:40 AM

    Indu ji

    every word has so much meaning ----I can not find the appropriate words to comment on this poem -because no words will convey what i feel -----it is a fabulous piece of writing

    thanks alot


    Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
    Ismein galti nahin kisiki hai.

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  16. indu chhibberFebruary 20, 2013 10:25 AM

    OMG Rajni your sweet praise has really made my day-thank you ever so much.
    Lots of love!

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  17. AkankshaFebruary 21, 2013 12:04 PM

    Zakhm bharta hai- par vo chubhta hai - You stole my heart away with this line!
    Loved being here and surrounded by poetry! Thanks for sharing the link.

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  18. indu chhibberFebruary 21, 2013 2:06 PM

    Akanksha welcome here.I am very happy that you liked your first visit-hope i will not disappoint you later.

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  19. SUCHARITAFebruary 22, 2013 11:39 AM

    Each word,each line, is rich with meaning and emotion...an absolute blockbuster of a poem.

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    1. indu chhibberFebruary 22, 2013 11:57 AM

      You have floored me totally with your praise Sucharita--this is great for my morale.

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  20. Ashish GouravFebruary 23, 2013 10:37 PM

    "...Aur kismat mein bhi maayoosi thi..." ...umm... surreal!

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  21. PanchaliFebruary 25, 2013 10:03 AM

    "Hum banaate hain khud hi apna kal,
    Ismein galti nahin kisiki hai.
    Jo bhi boya thaa,wo hi paaya hai,
    Ranjish ye jhoot,bewajah si hai."----wish people really understood the value of giving positive strokes rather than spending time in criticising. This is b e a u t i f u l...!!!

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  22. indu chhibberFebruary 25, 2013 10:03 PM

    Coming from you Panchali, this praise is awesome!!!!!!

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