मन की पतंग
सुबह से उड़ रही है
झेल के आयी है कितने ही ताप
पहुंची थी जाके कहीं सूरज के पास
खींच लिया मैंने उसे अपनी ओर
शुक्र है अब तक पक्की है डोर
पर इन हवाओं का क्या है इलाज
भटकाती रहती हैं इसकी परवाज
कब तक उड़ेगी ये कब तक तनेगी
सर्द गरम मौसम ये कब तक सहेगी
रुकेगी तो काँटों में फस जायेगी
के क्षत क्षत ये हो कर बिखर जायेगी
उड़ती रहो फिर यूँ उड़ती रहो
सम्भालो मुझे खुद संभलती रहो।
बहुत सुंदर इन्दु जी ।
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Jitendra.
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ReplyDeleteNice verse! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kokila :)
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Deleteबहुत सुंदर रचना . कितना अच्छा हो अगर मन की पतंग शांत, मुस्कुराती हुई ठंडी हवा में झूलती रहे और हमें भी शान्त्मग्न कर दे.
ReplyDeleteAAP ne toh bahut he sundar tasveer khinchi hai.Kaash aisa ho.
DeleteBeautiful one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyotirmoy.
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DeleteBeautifully written! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepa.
DeleteHappy to see you here :)
Love the last 2 lines the most!
ReplyDeleteThe poem reminds me of a recent Bollywood song.
Replacing the lyrics:
Udi udi jaaye, "Mann" ki patang dekho, udi udi jaaye! :)
Is it? Never heard this song.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by.
Fabulous! I think if you put this down in Hindi, it would come out to be even better!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alok.I would,but how?I don't have Hindi keyboard here.Shall look it up however.
DeleteThanks for the suggestion.Typing it in Eng script is rather cumbersome too.
This is really very nice, Indu. Loved reading Hindi poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear,I am happy that you liked it.It means a lot.
DeleteThat was really beautiful Indu. Indeed, a mind that never wanders or never ventures beyond familiar territory will eventually get stuck in a rut and rot away.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing.
Cheers,
CRD
Scripted In Sanity
Thanks a lot CRD,and welcome to jeeteraho
DeleteHow beautiful this is!
ReplyDeleteThank you Purba,I cherish your words.
DeleteProfound! Behterin! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot I.D,and welcome to jeeteraho!
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